高分作文標志：

　　1、是否長短句交叉;2、是否會使用插入語;3、用詞是否多樣、準確、形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞; 4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞; 5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

　　下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

　　1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀地反映事實。句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個經(jīng)典結尾的例子：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

　　2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作為插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞、助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。舉例如下： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

　　3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一條的例子中，applicable替換proper; approaches替換ways; implement替換carry out; sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)。

　　下面舉一篇某位同學寫的優(yōu)秀作文的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法，精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

　　I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

　　exceedingly 替換 very;(個人認為替換成overwhelmingly更出彩)

　　thrilling 替換 exciting;

　　sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth;

　　google 替換 search;

　　an army of 替換 a lot of。

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情;

　　Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular;

　　Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …;

　　Advancement 替換 development;

　　Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into;

　　Current ( currently )替換 now;

　　Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.;

　　Growing individuals 替換 more and more people;

　　It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型， 說某事是毫不夸張的。 (it goes without exaggeration that更好)

　　For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

　　For a start 替換 To begin with;

　　We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法;

　　our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動;

　　Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides;

　　Deliver 替換 send。

　　There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

　　There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型;其次however作為插入語;再次，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to。

　　Emerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing );

　　Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞。(直接用 netizen更好)

　　As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

　　No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides;

　　Computers do play ，使用do 表示強調;

　　Positive 替換 important / good 等;

　　A slice of 替換 a part of;

　　Unfavorable 替換 bad;

　　Impacts 替換 effects / influences;

　　We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語;

　　Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) ;

　　Facet 替換 aspect。