2009年考研英語(yǔ)40篇大作文演練與名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

第十二篇

　　12 Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:

　　1. describe the picture;

　　2. interpret the meaning of the picture;

　　3. make your comment.

　　You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　該圖描述的是一位在等紅燈時(shí)向道路上傾倒垃圾的人。該文可以分為三段來(lái)寫(xiě)：第一段在描述圖畫(huà)后對(duì)此種行為定性。第二段寫(xiě)這種做法的危害。第三段說(shuō)解決問(wèn)題的辦法。In the picture, while waiting for the green light, a driver dumped all the cigarette ends from a can onto the road. This picture reflects the selfishness of a group of city residents. They have formed the habit of keeping personal spaces such as rooms and cars clean, but when they come to public places, they tend to throw garbage or even spit here and there.

　　This practice is extremely harmful to the pursuit of happiness of urban dwellers including those people mentioned above. This phenomenon tends to spread and more and more people will not learn to behave themselves unless the first rule violators get punished severely. The city environment is closely related to life quality—when there is garbage here and there, everyone will fall victim and nobody can escape this vicious cycle.

　　To solve this serious social problem, the government has to establish laws to punish all those people who pollute the environment. The media should not only teach people how to behave themselves and explain why such behaviors are important to the well�瞓eing of all members of the society. What is the most important is the interaction between individuals—they should first try to observe the rules and then help others form the good habit. This is certainly not easy, but this is the first step to the dream of a more beautiful city and a happier life. 第一段在描述圖畫(huà)后，寫(xiě)該圖反映了一些城市居民的自私。他們將自己的個(gè)人空間拾掇得干干凈凈，而到了公共場(chǎng)所卻亂扔垃圾甚至隨地吐痰。

　　第二段先說(shuō)這種做法對(duì)城市居民的幸福追求非常有害。這種現(xiàn)象有可能擴(kuò)散——除非第一批人被嚴(yán)懲，后來(lái)者方會(huì)自律。城市環(huán)境與生活質(zhì)量緊密相關(guān)——當(dāng)?shù)教幎际抢�圾的時(shí)候，每個(gè)人都是受害者，也沒(méi)有人會(huì)逃出這個(gè)惡性循環(huán)。

　　第三段說(shuō)要解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題，首先政府應(yīng)制定法律來(lái)嚴(yán)懲所有污染環(huán)境的人。其次媒體不僅應(yīng)告訴人們?cè)趺醋�，也�?yīng)解釋為什么這樣做對(duì)所有成員的幸福都很重要。而后說(shuō)最重要的是個(gè)人之間的相互影響——人們應(yīng)該先自己遵守規(guī)則，然后去幫助他人養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣。最后說(shuō)這肯定并不容易，但這是通往更美麗的城市和更幸福的生活的第一步。 這道題目中的圖畫(huà)是我親眼所見(jiàn)，給我觸動(dòng)很深。迎特奧、迎世博，上海越來(lái)越美麗，絕大多數(shù)人越來(lái)越文明，很令人欣慰，可是有些人還是不自覺(jué)。在看到身邊的事情后，建議大家想想為什么會(huì)產(chǎn)生這個(gè)問(wèn)題，而后怎樣解決。我的做法是隨身攜帶日記本、筆與微型照相機(jī)，當(dāng)然后者盡量少用，把遇到的事情對(duì)你造成的第一次沖擊和感覺(jué)在第一時(shí)間記錄下來(lái)。請(qǐng)相信這是非常珍貴的。隨著積累的增加，你會(huì)慢慢地發(fā)現(xiàn)模糊的問(wèn)題變得清晰起來(lái)，煩躁的心也漸漸平靜下來(lái)。能擁有歷史的親歷者與審視者的雙重身份的人，是相當(dāng)少的，這是一種幸福。