文都名師：2010年考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作命題理論分析

　　英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作時(shí)考生由于倉(cāng)促，緊張等原因，很容易犯一些簡(jiǎn)單的，一眼就能發(fā)現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤。所以考生一定要留出幾分鐘時(shí)間用于修改。不要大幅度進(jìn)行修改，更不要因?yàn)樾薷钠茐木砻嬲麧崳�影響閱卷老師心情。修改時(shí)可以從以下幾點(diǎn)進(jìn)行：

　　1)語(yǔ)法：包括時(shí)態(tài)是否一致，主謂是否一致，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)是否對(duì)應(yīng)，被動(dòng)主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)是否錯(cuò)用等

　　2)詞匯：包括連接上下句或段落的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)，固定搭配，詞類(lèi)混淆，誤用及物不及物動(dòng)詞等。

　　3)篇章：包括文章的中心思想是否正確(這對(duì)于議論文來(lái)說(shuō)至關(guān)重要)、結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理(要做到direction要求的內(nèi)容缺一不可，沒(méi)有要求的內(nèi)容不要自作多情的寫(xiě)在文章中)。

　　因此，考生在復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)更應(yīng)該強(qiáng)調(diào)方法的應(yīng)用效能，下面，以一片真題為例分析并總結(jié)大作文的寫(xiě)作流程，細(xì)心體味定會(huì)有豁然開(kāi)朗的感覺(jué)。

　　寫(xiě)好漫畫(huà)類(lèi)作文，一般有以下幾個(gè)步驟：

　　(1)根據(jù)所給的漫畫(huà)以及漫畫(huà)的文字?jǐn)⑹鰞?nèi)容，提煉漫畫(huà)的主題。

　　Example:

　　DIRECTIONS:

　　A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.

　　B. Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET II.

　　C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:

　　解析：漫畫(huà)中，母雞下蛋后十分驕傲的表情，并吹噓到：“本母雞下的蛋沒(méi)有棱角，保證有蛋皮，蛋清，蛋黃�！笨梢�(jiàn)，母雞為之驕傲和吹噓的事情實(shí)為分內(nèi)之事，無(wú)須大勢(shì)渲染。正如，“如此承諾”中概括的一樣：各行各業(yè)興承諾，歡迎監(jiān)督不推脫，原本皆為分內(nèi)事，何須高唱文明歌。綜上所述，漫畫(huà)主題為“承諾分內(nèi)事”。

　　(2)根據(jù)要求(direction)，確定文章段落的數(shù)量和段落的內(nèi)容，即文章的提綱。

　　解析：1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.

　　2. Give your comments

　　根據(jù)提綱中的信息1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon. 本文開(kāi)頭需要兩個(gè)段落，即客觀描述漫畫(huà)段，引出暗含主題段。

　　根據(jù)提綱中的信息2. Give your comments 本篇文章下文要體現(xiàn)出作者對(duì)該現(xiàn)象的評(píng)論，即持有該觀點(diǎn)的原因和最后得出的結(jié)論。

　　即，文章由四個(gè)段落組成：客觀描述漫畫(huà)段—主題段—原因段—對(duì)策段。

　　(3)根據(jù)提綱要求，利用恰當(dāng)語(yǔ)句組段成篇。

　　SAMPLE

　　As is shown in the cartoon, the hen that has just laid an egg is shouting, with her head raised high, "I ensure that my egg brings no corners and that it consists of such three parts as eggshell, egg white and yolk."

　　What I've mentioned above is the surface messages conveyed by the cartoon. It seems from the hen's proud look that she is expected to make a promise for the egg she lays. It fact, it is clear that the hen promises what turns out to be her own duty.

　　There are some possible reasons for this common social phenomenon. For one thing, the social competition is becoming so fierce that all trades tend to produce ads to make themselves better known to the public. For another, they're not prepared to face the challenge and as a result, they can do little except declare their own duty as something praiseworthy.

　　In my opinion, every trade should try every means to improve its competitive forces instead of boasting like the hen in the cartoon. Therefore, I draw my conclusion that just as a hen shouldn't promise for her egg, so no trade in the society should boast themselves for something within their duty and that they should work hard to provide more benefits for the society. In a word, try not to be like the boasting hen in our life!