一、遣詞用語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確地道

　　詞語(yǔ)的選用直接關(guān)系到句子的優(yōu)劣，也勢(shì)必關(guān)系到段落的主體思想，進(jìn)而關(guān)系到整篇文章的質(zhì)量，所以“把恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~用到恰當(dāng)?shù)牡胤健背闪藢?xiě)作者的至理名言。在寫(xiě)作中選擇準(zhǔn)確的詞匯、使用地道的語(yǔ)言，不僅可以使文章的表達(dá)更加到位，更重要的是能起到“點(diǎn)睛”的作用，成為作文獲得高分的亮點(diǎn)之一。

　　二、開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾突破常規(guī)

　　文章開(kāi)頭段除了要表明主題外，還有一個(gè)重要的任務(wù)就是要引起讀者的興趣，使文章具有與眾不同的吸引力，四、六級(jí)寫(xiě)作閱卷往往根據(jù)第一段確定文章分?jǐn)?shù)檔次，如果能在開(kāi)頭就表現(xiàn)出不同凡響的語(yǔ)句，對(duì)于提高整個(gè)文章的分?jǐn)?shù)檔次會(huì)有很大的作用。

　　另外，文章的結(jié)尾也同樣不容忽視。結(jié)尾篇幅雖然不宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)，但卻也是決定文章成敗的點(diǎn)睛之筆，因此可以有意識(shí)地采取某種突破常規(guī)的寫(xiě)作手法，讓考官在讀到結(jié)尾時(shí)能眼睛一亮。

　　三、適當(dāng)運(yùn)用修辭手法

　　準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眯揶o手法，會(huì)極大地增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力，使文章更加生動(dòng)形象、意蘊(yùn)豐富并且引人入勝。英文寫(xiě)作中常見(jiàn)的修辭手法有比喻、平行結(jié)構(gòu)、修辭問(wèn)句等。

　　四、恰當(dāng)使用警句格言

　　一篇好的作文除了要有合理的結(jié)構(gòu)和布局之外，如果能有一定的文采，一定會(huì)錦上添花，而表現(xiàn)出文采的一個(gè)重要手段就是恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂镁�句格言�?/P>

　　【實(shí)考作文例析】 (98-6)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below:

　　1)有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來(lái)好運(yùn)

　　2)我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無(wú)關(guān)……

　　【10分作文】

　　Some people say that "lucky numbers" can bring them good luck. They believe that lucky numbers make them feel safe or energetic and so they can deal with problems better.

　　However, others don't believe that numbers have any connection with good luck. They think such idea (such kind of idea/such an idea) is only a superstitious belief. In fact, numbers is only number. Luck is only luck. There is no relations (relationship) between them. So far as I am concerned, "lucky numbers" have nothing to do with good luck. If lucky numbers really worked , we were not to fail anything. Numbers can never bring good luck to a person at all and our fortune is in our own hands. Therefore, everyone can have good fortune only if he tries his best.

　　【點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，句式變化也還可以，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤也很少(斜體部分)，但從整篇文章來(lái)看缺少語(yǔ)言上的亮點(diǎn)。

　　首先，遣詞用語(yǔ)缺乏特色。全文在用詞方缺乏深度和特色，幾乎都是一些過(guò)于大眾化的單詞，如believe, think等，不能給人留下深刻的印象。

　　其次，沒(méi)有恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用修辭。全文未運(yùn)用任何恰當(dāng)?shù)男揶o手法。

　　再次，沒(méi)有使用警句格言。全文未出現(xiàn)任何警句或格言。

　　最后，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾平淡無(wú)奇。開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾均沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)有特色的句式，無(wú)法激起閱卷老師的興奮點(diǎn)。

　　【14分作文】

　　Some people say that some numbers will bring them good luck. Take 8 for example. The Chinese pronunciation of the number “8” has almost the same sound as that of the Chinese character "發(fā)", which means making a fortune. Therefore, many Chinese people spare no money to get their telephone number or car number to include this number "8". They believe without any doubt that the number will bring them money.

　　However, others don't believe that numbers have any connection with good luck. They think such kind of idea is only an ignorant and superstitious belief. They will say: How can you ever have any good luck simply because of some lucky numbers, even if you don't work hard, don't have good opportunities and don't get along well with the people around you?

　　So far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter. Obviously, such belief is only a kind of superstition. Perhaps it holds true for some cases, but often it does not. Numbers can never bring good luck to a person at all and our fortune is in our own hands. Therefore, everyone can have good fortune only if he tries his best. Let's always remember "Opportunities are only for the prepared mind"and "No pains, no gains."

　　【點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文之所以能夠得到14分，除了結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、句式多變以外，還有很多語(yǔ)言上的亮點(diǎn)。

　　首先，遣詞用語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確地道。如第一段第四句中spare(吝惜，節(jié)約)一詞就用的很準(zhǔn)，形象地刻畫(huà)出這類(lèi)人的心態(tài)。緊接著第五句中的without any doubt(不假思索)的使用也非常恰當(dāng)，提醒讀者不假思索地相信幸運(yùn)數(shù)字是缺乏辯證思維的。另外，最后一段中的hold true也是典型的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)方式，顯現(xiàn)出本文用語(yǔ)的地道。

　　其次，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用修辭手法。第二段第四句運(yùn)用反問(wèn)使問(wèn)題的答案不言自明，觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)更加有力。而該句中三個(gè)don’t構(gòu)成排比，更加強(qiáng)了氣勢(shì)，使論證達(dá)到高潮。

　　再次，恰當(dāng)使用警句格言。本文的最后以?xún)删渲V語(yǔ)作為結(jié)束，運(yùn)用恰到好處，又突顯出作者的文采。

　　最后，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾突破常規(guī)。開(kāi)頭運(yùn)用例證為主題提供充分驗(yàn)證，說(shuō)服力很強(qiáng)。結(jié)尾用諺語(yǔ)收尾，使人眼前一亮。

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