2010年英語四級考試作文評分標準及錯誤總結(jié)

　　三、冠詞錯誤

　　1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.

　　In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.

　　2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.

　　They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.

　　四、代詞錯誤

　　1. 偷梁換柱

　　1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.

　　An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.

　　2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

　　If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.

　　2. 指代不明

　　1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

　　He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

　　2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.

　　五、形容詞、副詞錯誤

　　1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.

　　What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.

　　2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

　　Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.

　　六、分詞誤用

　　1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

　　Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.

　　2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.

　　Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.

　　七、修飾語誤置

　　1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.

　　Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.

　　2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　八、垂懸修飾語

　　1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.

　　Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.

　　2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.

　　To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.

　　九、平行錯誤

　　1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.

　　While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.

　　2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.

　　Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.

　　十、搭配錯誤

　　1) In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

　　2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　十一、破句

　　1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.

　　Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

　　2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important