2010年英語四級(jí)考試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及錯(cuò)誤總結(jié)

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

　　2分……條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

　　5分……基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。

　　8分……基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

　　11分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。��

　　14分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好�；�本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。(注: 白卷, 作文與題目毫不相關(guān), 或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想,則給0分。)

　　常見寫作錯(cuò)誤

　　一、主語錯(cuò)誤

　　1. 主語缺失

　　1)In our country feels very free.

　　People feel free in our country.

　　2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.

　　People in my hometown are very busy.

　　2. 非名詞主語

　　1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.

　　Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.

　　2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

　　Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.

　　3. 主謂錯(cuò)位

　　1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.

　　People can acquire knowledge from books.

　　2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.

　　Now people can’t do without TV.

　　二、謂語錯(cuò)誤

　　1. 多重謂語

　　1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.

　　In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.

　　2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.

　　Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.

　　2. 非動(dòng)詞謂語

　　1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.

　　Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.

　　2)It is said that the place worths touring.

　　It is said that the place is worth touring.

　　3. 主謂不一致

　　1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.

　　I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.

　　2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.

　　I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..

　　4. 誤用詞組

　　1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.

　　They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.

　　2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.

　　I am afraid that it’s going to rain.