2009年12月英語四級寫作考前必背范文20篇(恩波)

　　◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評：

　　概述并引入下文

　　◇語言點(diǎn)提示：

　　(1)此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?�？勺鳛檫^渡句，引出下文

　　(2)注意描述有關(guān)火災(zāi)客觀事實(shí)，多使用被動語態(tài)，如are alarmed by，were reported，were burned down，were damaged，F(xiàn)aced with。

　　◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評：

　　論述火災(zāi)的主要原因是使用電熱水器，還有造成火災(zāi)的次要原因是實(shí)用電爐、蠟燭和亂扔煙蒂，

　　◇語言點(diǎn)提示：

　　electric water-heaters電熱水器

　　◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評：

　　詳述預(yù)防火災(zāi)的三點(diǎn)措施，注意使用連接詞語first, second, lastly。

　　◇語言點(diǎn)提示：

　　take precautions采取預(yù)防措施

　　fire extinguisher滅火器

　　(二)Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

　　1. 校園盜竊案件時有發(fā)生

　　2. 物品被盜的原因

　　3. 學(xué)生如何加強(qiáng)防盜意識

　　●審題概述●�r

　　這是一篇論述校園物品被盜和加強(qiáng)防盜意識的文章。第一段，主要陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況。第二段，主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。第三段，主要闡述學(xué)生怎樣增強(qiáng)防盜意識。

　　【范文】

　　 Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

　　“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.

　　What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.

　　In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.