大學(xué)英語四六級考試高分作文三大要素

　　【12分作文】

　　Nowadays, it is generally accepted that reading is of quite (much) importance. But when it comes to how to read, there has sprung up a heated discussion as to whether we should read selectively or read extensively.

　　Some people are in favor of the idea of reading selectively. First, they believe that it is not how much one reads but what he reads that really counts. In addition, since one's time and effort (efforts) are limited, we (he) should read books that are suited to our (his) interests and needs.

　　However, those who insist on reading extensively argue that it is through reading extensively that one can broaden his horizon. Only when one reads widely, can he really make remarkable achievements in his study.

　　In my opinion, we should read selectively on the basis of reading extensively. For one thing, by reading widely we can keep ourselves well informed of as much knowledge as possible. For another, without selection, reading may become aimless and blind, which makes reading ineffective. Therefore, we should combine selective reading and extensive reading.【點(diǎn)評】

　　本文雖出現(xiàn)個(gè)別語法錯(cuò)誤(斜體部分)，但結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，句式多變，行文流暢，不失為一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。

　　首先，長句短句錯(cuò)落有致。本文中句式多樣，，各段長短句搭配合理，如首段中第一句話簡潔明了引出事實(shí)背景，然后通過when it comes to…句型自然過渡到要討論的主題。文中對長句的運(yùn)用，體現(xiàn)了作者較強(qiáng)的語言功底。

　　其次，主動(dòng)被動(dòng)運(yùn)用合理。本文首句使用被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)it is generally accepted that…引出普遍存在的事實(shí)，恰當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確，符合書面語的文體風(fēng)格。而文中其他地方盡管沒有更多地運(yùn)用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，也是從實(shí)際的表達(dá)需要出發(fā)，并不影響本文的整體效果。

　　再次，倒裝強(qiáng)調(diào)穿插得當(dāng)。文中穿插了倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)等特色句式，起到了突出強(qiáng)調(diào)、增加氣勢的作用。

　　第四，句與句間銜接緊密。本文無論從意思上還是形式上都非常連貫，過渡自然，連接詞運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確，整篇文章給人感覺邏輯清晰，渾然一體。

　　要素三：出現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)

　　一、遣詞用語準(zhǔn)確地道

　　詞語的選用直接關(guān)系到句子的優(yōu)劣，也勢必關(guān)系到段落的主體思想，進(jìn)而關(guān)系到整篇文章的質(zhì)量，所以“把恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~用到恰當(dāng)?shù)牡胤健背闪藢懽髡叩闹晾砻�言。在寫作中選擇準(zhǔn)確的詞匯、使用地道的語言，不僅可以使文章的表達(dá)更加到位，更重要的是能起到“點(diǎn)睛”的作用，成為作文獲得高分的亮點(diǎn)之一。

　　二、開頭結(jié)尾突破常規(guī)

　　文章開頭段除了要表明主題外，還有一個(gè)重要的任務(wù)就是要引起讀者的興趣，使文章具有與眾不同的吸引力，四、六級寫作閱卷往往根據(jù)第一段確定文章分?jǐn)?shù)檔次，如果能在開頭就表現(xiàn)出不同凡響的語句，對于提高整個(gè)文章的分?jǐn)?shù)檔次會(huì)有很大的作用。

　　另外，文章的結(jié)尾也同樣不容忽視。結(jié)尾篇幅雖然不宜過長，但卻也是決定文章成敗的點(diǎn)睛之筆，因此可以有意識(shí)地采取某種突破常規(guī)的寫作手法，讓考官在讀到結(jié)尾時(shí)能眼睛一亮。

　　三、適當(dāng)運(yùn)用修辭手法

　　準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眯揶o手法，會(huì)極大地增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力，使文章更加生動(dòng)形象、意蘊(yùn)豐富并且引人入勝。英文寫作中常見的修辭手法有比喻、平行結(jié)構(gòu)、修辭問句等。

　　四、恰當(dāng)使用警句格言

　　一篇好的作文除了要有合理的結(jié)構(gòu)和布局之外，如果能有一定的文采，一定會(huì)錦上添花，而表現(xiàn)出文采的一個(gè)重要手段就是恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂镁�句格言�?/P>

　　【實(shí)考作文例析】 (98-6)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below:

　　1)有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來好運(yùn)

　　2)我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無關(guān)……

　　【10分作文】

　　Some people say that "lucky numbers" can bring them good luck. They believe that lucky numbers make them feel safe or energetic and so they can deal with problems better.

　　However, others don't believe that numbers have any connection with good luck. They think such idea (such kind of idea/such an idea) is only a superstitious belief. In fact, numbers is only number. Luck is only luck. There is no relations (relationship) between them. So far as I am concerned, "lucky numbers" have nothing to do with good luck. If lucky numbers really worked , we were not to fail anything. Numbers can never bring good luck to a person at all and our fortune is in our own hands. Therefore, everyone can have good fortune only if he tries his best.【點(diǎn)評】

　　本文結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，句式變化也還可以，語法錯(cuò)誤也很少(斜體部分)，但從整篇文章來看缺少語言上的亮點(diǎn)。

　　首先，遣詞用語缺乏特色。全文在用詞方缺乏深度和特色，幾乎都是一些過于大眾化的單詞，如believe, think等，不能給人留下深刻的印象。

　　其次，沒有恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用修辭。全文未運(yùn)用任何恰當(dāng)?shù)男揶o手法。

　　再次，沒有使用警句格言。全文未出現(xiàn)任何警句或格言。

　　最后，開頭結(jié)尾平淡無奇。開頭結(jié)尾均沒有出現(xiàn)有特色的句式，無法激起閱卷老師的興奮點(diǎn)。

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