考試吧文都：2010年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試作文點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　1 文都徐可風(fēng)精彩論點(diǎn)： 考場(chǎng)寫作的本質(zhì)就是讓閱卷者在最短時(shí)間內(nèi)達(dá)到審美高潮

　　這是一位同行閱卷后發(fā)自肺腑的感悟。可以理解，閱卷老師也是人，也有七情六欲。乏味枯燥的閱卷過程讓我們有苦行僧的感覺。所以徐可風(fēng)請(qǐng)每一位考生要牢記這一點(diǎn)。那么如何才能讓閱卷老師在最短的時(shí)間內(nèi)達(dá)到審美高潮呢?以這次六級(jí)寫作為例。

　　Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese

　　1 近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象;

　　2 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因和后果;

　　3 針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，我認(rèn)為……

　　2 文都徐可風(fēng)精彩論點(diǎn)：請(qǐng)務(wù)必給閱卷者留下美麗性感的印象

　　“暈輪效應(yīng)”相信大家都熟悉了，所以給閱卷者的第一印象很重要，可以直接影響給分的分段。因?yàn)槲覀冊(cè)诮o分時(shí)是采取“總體印象評(píng)分”。也就是說，我們會(huì)根據(jù)考生作文的整個(gè)印象，先確定一個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)檔，再以該分?jǐn)?shù)檔為標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，稍微調(diào)整。

　　那么怎么樣能給閱卷者一個(gè)美麗而性感的印象呢?文都徐可風(fēng)建議，考生首先一定要注意自己的書寫必需干凈，千萬別潦草，也千萬別把作文搞得像個(gè)作戰(zhàn)地圖，箭頭滿天飛。這些都會(huì)導(dǎo)致“總體印象”差。

　　還有，一定要寫出一個(gè)清楚的三段式。如果寫一段，或是兩段，都會(huì)被扣分。有考生會(huì)問：“這是為什么呢?” 徐可風(fēng)想告訴大家，小時(shí)侯我曾經(jīng)研究馬為什么會(huì)站著睡覺，研究了很長(zhǎng)一段時(shí)間后，我發(fā)現(xiàn)沒有答案。而苦惱的是我的童年唯一能記起的事就是這個(gè)了。長(zhǎng)大以后有段時(shí)間我開始研究同性之間為什么會(huì)存在真摯的愛情呢，同樣也沒有答案。徐可風(fēng)終于認(rèn)識(shí)到這個(gè)世界有太多的事是沒有答案的。所以考生就按照文都徐可風(fēng)的建議去執(zhí)行就可以了。

　　作文的框架和書寫是讓閱卷者給你一個(gè)不錯(cuò)分?jǐn)?shù)檔的關(guān)鍵之關(guān)鍵。

　　附：文都徐可風(fēng)給大家的參考范文

　　Do you remember these famous litterateurs: Lu xun, Zhu zi qing, Laoshe or Bing xin? How familiar these names are! Unfortunately, countless students pay no attention to the study of Chinese. Nowadays, Internet, English and game occupy students’ time and attention. For the majority of students, the study of Chinese has become a remote memory。

　　Why such a phenomenon emerges? Educators attribute it to the ignorance of university administration. Chinese is an essential course for college students in China. However, for a long time there has been a neglect in the study of Chinese. Taking a look around, every teacher encourages students to spend all time on learning English. On the contrary, none of them promotes students to learn Chinese. In the wake of this situation, students will make growing Chinese mistakes in spelling, reading and speaking. Maybe someday, Chinese would fade from historical stage。

　　In my opinion, some drastic measures should be taken. First of all, we can raise students’ awareness that the study of Chinese is indispensable to us. In addition, teachers can offer more courses related to Chinese or Chinese culture. Finally, we can promote CCT(college Chinese testing) . In a word, due attention should be given to the study of Chinese。