2007年12月英語六級考試短文改錯沖刺訓(xùn)練(17)

　　本期重點：句子結(jié)構(gòu)混亂

　　主要問題是一個簡單句出現(xiàn)了兩個或多個謂語，或者用動詞作句子的主語或賓語, 或者句子關(guān)系結(jié)構(gòu)混亂等

　　考點例析

　　例1：In ordinary speech, a person of culture is the individual
　　can speak another language - the person who is familiar S5.______
　　with the arts, music, literature, philosophy, or history.
　　解析：這個句子出現(xiàn)了兩個位于動詞，在英語中不符合語言規(guī)范，從下文可以看出后面部分是修飾individual的定語從句，缺少了引導(dǎo)詞，所以要在can前加who或that。

　　例2：There are backward towns on the edge of Bombay or
　　Brasilia, just as though there were on the edge of S3._______
　　seventeenth-century London or early nineteenth-century Paris.
　　解析：本句大意是：在孟買或巴西利亞周邊有一些落后的城鎮(zhèn)，正如17世紀(jì)的倫敦或19世紀(jì)初期周邊也有一些落后城鎮(zhèn)一樣。兩句之間的連詞應(yīng)該表示比較，“與...相同”，使后一句成為前一句的比較狀語從句。連詞as意為“像...一樣”，前面just強調(diào)程度表示“正如，與...相同”。

　　例3：When the wedding is gathered by the altar, the bride and
　　groom exchange vows. Fllowing the vows, the couple
　　exchange rings. Wear the wedding ring on the forth finger of ________
　　the left hand is an old custom.
　　解析：本句的主語是動詞短語Wear the wedding ring on the forth finger of the left hand，但動詞本身不能做主語，只有用其相應(yīng)的動名詞形式才能做主語，所以將wear改為wearing

　　鞏固與拓展

　　1.Except for relatively isolated trouble spots like present-day
　　Somalia, and occasional years of good harvests, the world’s
　　food crisis has remained just around the corner. Most experts
　　believe this can continue even as if the population doubles by ________
　　the mid-21st century, although feeding I0 billion people will not
　　be easy for political, economic and environmental reasons.
　　2. With collections expand, with the needs and funtions of __________
　　museums change, empty space has become a very precious __________
　　commodity.
　　3.This modern treatment will cure leprosy in 6 to 12 months,
　　depend on the form of the disease. _________
　　4.Cloth-making, though a domestic industry in the esrly years,
　　had the characteristic of capitalist production separated the ____________
　　employer from the employee and in troduced the division of labor.
　　5. Here are a few ways to avoid end up on the reject pile. ______________
　　Print your CV on good-quality white paper.
　　CVs with flowery backgrounds or pink paper will
　　stand out for all the wrong reasons。

　　綜合訓(xùn)練

　　Aphrodite loved Adonis more than she did to heaven, for 1.______
　　He was a brisk, lovely young hunter. She abandoned her residence
　　at Olympus and took to the woods, where she dressed
　　herself up like a huntress and kept the youth companion all day 2.________
　　long. With him she roved through bushy grounds and groves and
　　over hills and dales, cheering hounds and pursuing game of a
　　harmless sort. They had a great time together. However, she
　　warned him many times to chase wild beasts like lions and 3.________
　　wolves, but the young man just laughed at the idea.��
　　One day, after warning him thus, she left to Olympus in 4.________
　　her chariot. Quite by chance Adonis" hounds found a boar, that 5.________
　　roused Adonis to enthusiasm. He hit the beast with a dart, and 6.________
　　the boar, turning on him ,buried its white tusk deep into his
　　tender side and trampled him to death.��
　　When Aphrodite came back to find her lover cold in death,
　　she burst into a passion of tears. Unable to wrest him back from
　　the low world, she sprinkled nectar on Adonis" blood and 7.________
　　turned it into anemone, a delicate purple flower.��
　　Aphrodite was, therefore, still inconsolable. In grief and 8.________
　　despair she flew to Zeus and implored him to restore Adonis to
　　her. Though she had Zeus" sympathy, Hades was by no means
　　prepared to comply with her request. After the much dispute a 9.________
　　compromise was worked out under which Adonis was to spend
　　half the year above ground with Aphrodite, but the rest six 10.________
　　months in the Elysian Fields. Therefore, in spring time Adonis
　　came back to the loving embrace of Aphrodite, but when winter
　　came he had to return most reluctantly to Hades.

　　參考答案及解析：

　　鞏固與拓展

　　1. as -> /
　　這里應(yīng)該表示“即使”的意思，所以去掉as，even if“即使，盡管”。

　　2. expand -> expanding, change -> changing

　　3. depend -. depending

　　4. separated前加that
　　此處separate后面應(yīng)為定語從句，修飾capitalist production。此處定語從句缺少主語，需要加上引導(dǎo)詞。

　　5. end -> ending

　　綜合訓(xùn)練

　　1. to → /��
　　did這里代表前文提到的動詞loved，是及物動詞，不用介詞就可直接加賓語。��

　　2. companion → company��
　　keep sb. company是固定搭配，意為“與某人做伴”，companion與company是同義詞，都是“伴侶”之意，但companion是可數(shù)名詞，而company則不可數(shù)。��

　　3. times ∧ to → not��
　　warn sb. not to do sth. 是固定搭配，意為“警告某人不要做某事”。很多有“警告某人做某事”的說法，況且這里根據(jù)上下文知道Aphrodite常警告Adonis不要捕獵獅、狼一類兇猛的野獸。

　　4. to → for��
　　leave for a place,意為“出發(fā)去某地”，介詞用for不用to。��

　　5. that → which��
　　這里是一個非限制定語從句，應(yīng)該用which引導(dǎo)。��

　　6. and → but��
　　這里有一個語氣的轉(zhuǎn)折，前一個分句說“他用標(biāo)槍投中了這頭野獸”，后面一個分句緊接
　　著就說“但這只野豬卻向他撲來……”前后形成對比，一個講人的行動，一個講獸的行動，兩者互相攻擊。

　　7. low → lower�ぷ鲂稳菰~用的low，有“地位低下”之意，但也常有“品質(zhì)、道德”敗壞之意，所以引申意常代替本意。這里lower world指的是“冥府,地下”，是和地下世界比較而言，因此較常用low的比較級形式。��

　　8. therefore → however��
　　上下文說Aphrodite把死去的Adonis變成了一種美麗的花，但仍不感到安慰，又向宙斯求助要他向冥王把Adonis討回。因此，這里如果用therefore則隱含“感到安慰”之意，如果是however，則表轉(zhuǎn)折，意為“仍不滿足”。��

　　9. the → /��
　　dispute是不可數(shù)名詞，意為“爭辯、討論”。much dispute表示“大量爭吵，討價還價”，the完全不必要。��

　　10. rest → remaining��
　　rest表“剩下”時，可說the rest of… 或只說the rest，在這里說“剩下的六個月”是the rest of the year或the remaining 6 months。

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