大學(xué)英語四六級高分作文標(biāo)志及寫作建議

　　As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

　　No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

　　Computers do play ，do 強調(diào)

　　Positive 替換 important / good 等

　　A slice of 替換 a part of

　　Unfavorable 替換 bad

　　Impacts 替換 effects / influences

　　We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語

　　Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) Facet 替換 aspect

　　以下是30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞，可以參考：

　　1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)

　　2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good

　　3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad

　　如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換

　　eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 滬江四六級

　　4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.

　　注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

　　Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.

　　5. a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some

　　6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,

　　hold the view that, it is widely shared that,

　　it is universally acknowledged that)替think

　　(因為是書面語，所以要加that)

　　7.affair ,business ,matter 替換thing

　　8. shared 代 common

　　9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits )

　　10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion

　　11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.

　　Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.

　　Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

　　12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly

　　13……beneficial, rewarding替換helpful,

　　14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer

　　15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very

　　16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable …… 替換 unnecessary, avoidable

　　17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in

　　18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.滬

　　19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

　　20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

　　21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.

　　22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換……reasons for sth

　　23.desire 替換want.

　　24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to

　　25.bear in mind that 替換remember

　　26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)

　　27. interaction替換communication

　　28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth

　　29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance

　　30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible