2010年6月大學英語四級考試寫作思路突破(5)

　　第一部分 寫作——特訓練習與范文

　　訓練一

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Graduates Work as Village Officials. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1. 你是否認為大學生當村官是個好主意;

　　2. 大學生能給鄉(xiāng)村提供些什么;

　　3. 大學生能從村官職位中獲得什么。

　　College Graduates Work as Village Officials

　　訓練二

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Continuing Education. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)上圖為某城市2002-2008年參加繼續(xù)教育的人數(shù)情況，請描述其中的變化;

　　2)分析導(dǎo)致該變化的原因;

　　3)談?wù)勀銓�繼續(xù)教育的看法。

　　訓練三

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Water Shortage. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1. 水資源短缺已成為嚴重問題;

　　2. 造成水資源短缺的原因;

　　3. 提出解決方案。

　　On Water Shortage

　　答案與解析

　　訓練一

　　【范文】

　　College Graduates Work as Village Officials

　　Nowadays many college graduates choose to work as village officials in the remote areas. To this, people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.

　　Above all, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. First, they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged. In addition, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are fighting for the handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.

　　Therefore, college graduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside.

　　【點評】

　　文章描述大學生當村官這一現(xiàn)象，并分析其帶來的諸多好處。第二段運用Above all, in addition, 引出了兩點好處，在使用First, Secondly將第一點好處細化，這樣使文章層次清晰。本文使用了一些精彩的語言，使文章增色不少，例如：contribute a lot to，speed the development，a win-win choice等等。

　　訓練二

　　【范文】

　　A Boom in Continuing Education

　　From the graph, we can learn the number of continuing education participants has kept increasing from 2002 to 2008 in X city. In 2002 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in the continuing education, but in 2004 the number grew to 70 thousand, and in 2006 150, and by 2008, the number has reached 230 thousand. It can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining more and more popularity。