2009年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作范文及解析(考試吧新東方)

　　真題：考試吧新東方：2009年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)試題(A卷)　B卷

　　答案：[A卷:考試吧昂立版　恩波版　新東方版　文都版]　[在線估分]

　　下載：考試吧首發(fā)：2009年12月19日英語(yǔ)四級(jí)真題+答案(A卷)　B卷下載

　　解析：文都點(diǎn)評(píng)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)試題【實(shí)錄】 新東方點(diǎn)評(píng)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)試題【實(shí)錄】

　　【真題描述】

　　Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of "Creating a Green Campus". You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

　　1、建設(shè)綠色校園很重要

　　2、綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境……

　　3、為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該……

　　【真題解析】

　　今天的四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作部分不出意外地考察了校園生活方面的題目。這種題目沿襲了近幾年來(lái)對(duì)于此類(lèi)題目的考核方式，主要針對(duì)校園環(huán)境方面的話題進(jìn)行探討。寫(xiě)作提綱也跟以往相似：先闡述現(xiàn)象，然后就此現(xiàn)象的產(chǎn)生原因或應(yīng)對(duì)措施，抑或危害進(jìn)行分層次分析，最后在第三段發(fā)表個(gè)人見(jiàn)解，一般是預(yù)測(cè)未來(lái)趨勢(shì)或者進(jìn)行呼吁。只要對(duì)于四級(jí)作文稍作準(zhǔn)備的同學(xué)，在見(jiàn)到本次考題的時(shí)候都不會(huì)感到束手無(wú)策。

　　繼2009年Free Admission to Museums，本次題目再次結(jié)合校園生活引發(fā)思考，這個(gè)題目既考查了學(xué)生對(duì)平時(shí)生活其中的校園環(huán)境的思考，也需要同學(xué)們對(duì)校園精神環(huán)境方面的深入思索(“綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境”)。這樣一個(gè)話題不僅是學(xué)生們聚焦的中心，也值得引起校方和整個(gè)教育體制的一個(gè)思考。

　　一般而言，四級(jí)寫(xiě)作的結(jié)構(gòu)是三段式，就本文而言，建議三段可以完全按照提綱進(jìn)行：即第一段：綠色校園這個(gè)話題值得引起重視;第二段：綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境，還應(yīng)該和人文精神以及文明建設(shè)聯(lián)系在一起;第三段：為了建設(shè)綠色校園，學(xué)校、政府和社會(huì)各界應(yīng)該采取哪些措施。

　　同學(xué)們?cè)诳紙?chǎng)中構(gòu)思作文的時(shí)候，不僅應(yīng)該從提綱入手，還應(yīng)該想一想老師上課時(shí)講過(guò)哪些亮點(diǎn)句式是可以在本篇文章當(dāng)中用上的，比如說(shuō)超豪華強(qiáng)調(diào)句式：It is +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+逗號(hào)+it has been said+逗號(hào)+that+原句剩余成分。再比如說(shuō)大家最熟悉的部分倒裝句：Only in this way, can we……抑或經(jīng)典被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，都是同學(xué)們應(yīng)該在考場(chǎng)上能夠想起來(lái)的可以和本篇文章相結(jié)合起來(lái)的句型。同時(shí)，同學(xué)們應(yīng)該考慮到用詞的替換，在本篇文章中，關(guān)于環(huán)境我們可以找到三個(gè)詞進(jìn)行替換：environment, surrounding, atmosphere。

　　參考范文：

　　Creating a Green Campus

　　Recently the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention.Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individulas and society,for its significance cannot be denied。

　　A green campus environment, rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students. Needless to say, a green campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.If there were no green surrounding among the college students, their soul would be not as pure as we wish.In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere。

　　In view of the seriousness of the situation, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus. In the first place, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. Furthermore, it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves. Only in this way, can we get a satisfactory results. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future。