2009年6月英語四級考前熱點高分范文(一)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)有的人喜歡獨自旅行，有的人喜歡與別人結(jié)伴而行

　　2)兩種旅行方式的好處

　　3)你更喜歡哪種旅行方式，為什么?

　　Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出兩種不同的旅行方式，提綱第2點要求分別闡述兩種旅行方式的好處，提綱第3點要求表明“我”的傾向，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。

　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：指出人們對旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜歡獨自旅行，有人喜歡結(jié)伴旅行;對比闡述獨自旅行和結(jié)伴旅行各自的好處;表明“我”更喜歡于哪種旅行方式，并說明理由。

　　高分范文

　　Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?

　　[1]When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone, [2]while others prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference.

　　[4]Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring others. [3]Moreover, traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surprise, [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. [8]Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing, the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. [3]For another, [4]traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them.

　　[9]As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum, [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.